
Come in for a while
Take time, look around
I'm a unique kind of construction
No others like me to be found
I'm forever changing
Inside and out
I'm always changing appearance
Of this theres no doubt
My foundations are sturdy
This is a fact
Thanks to the love a woman
Whom raised me like that
I have many flaws
Can't be perfect you know!
Though I know how to nurture
And like to help others grow
If life is the building
Then mines only half done
I'm still under construction
But that's half the fun
"D’verse Poets Pub is a place for poets and writers to gather to celebrate poetry"
Yay! We can help so many grow, help them find their voice so they too can pen a piece such as this. I like the way you build! :) And thanks for linking up with dVersePoets...our combined voice grows ever louder! Raise your glass! :) I also think that maybe Mom was a pretty special lady!
ReplyDeleteamazing write from an amazing talent :)
ReplyDeleteI'm still under construction
ReplyDeleteBut that's half the fun
I'll toast to that fun.
I like this... it made me think of the phrase 'a work in progress'.. which I know we all are- we're ever changing which is a good thing..
ReplyDeleteSo true, hey? and a solid foundation is no small thing, it cuts the work of growing whole in half (speaking as a VERY late bloomer:)!)
ReplyDeletenice...glad you keep that foundation and a fine nod to the one that raised you there...got my flaws as well...paint peeling a bit and maybe a crack or two but hey that makes us unique right?
ReplyDeleteOh, this is great! And the uniqueness is the best part!
ReplyDeleteI loved this. We're all under construction, and what a solid foundation you've received to help others grow. Nice to meet you!
ReplyDeleteyes I agree constuction is have the fun, I'd prefer not to do the manual labor though..haha
ReplyDeleteGreat piece!
This is great perspective on how we develop through our lives. And kudos to she who poured your foundation.
ReplyDeleteha yes - think we're under construction as long as we live...but being imperfect and never stop building is what makes life interesting...thanks for linking up with us katherine..raising my glass
ReplyDeleteNice write. I love the mention of having a sturdy foundation because of who raised you. Very playful and positive, nice poem in keeping with the construction theme.
ReplyDeleteHalf the battle is knowing where one is at and your words express that very well.
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful words Katherine!
ReplyDeleteI love this --I really like the idea of being works in progress...and under construction. thanks for this.
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this is very nice katherine... ;) we all have new "wings" under construction, dont we?
ReplyDeleteI would like to thank you all very much for your wonderful comments... I truly appreciate each and every one them. I would have liked to have responded individually to each one of you but I'm in the midst of researching & writing assignment.. so time is a little stretched at the moment. Thank you all again!
ReplyDeleteI hope I'm still under construction; I'd like to be down-sized!
ReplyDeletea beautiful piece... excellent selection by the Everyday Goddess. truly inspirational.
ReplyDeleteLove it, love it, love it! And congrats on your Goddess award!
ReplyDeleteEva... I'm sure you're beautiful just as you are.. thanks for visiting.
ReplyDeleteReflections that you & I wasn't aware I'd been given an award... how lovely!
Hi Janine..thank you very much!