My Beautiful People

Monday, August 1, 2011

Five Score Years Ago!








Orange trees & fennel shrubs


Big dams & rolling fields


Rusted blades turn round and round


Water's pumped from the power it yields




It may be old and rustic


It's a landmark of the land


Great grandfather built it five score years ago


And it still stands tall and grand



By KMF


Inspired by picture prompt

by Tess from Magpie Tales

16 comments:

  1. The windmills that I saw when in Holland years ago were massive. Some were working and some weren't. And they did stand tall and grand! Great Magpie!

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  2. nice easy rhyme catherine that carries a history like a comfortable shirt...

    hope you are well...

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  3. Nice! you've reminded me of my grandparents' farms. I must look more closely to see these icons of life. Not many of them left.

    Rick

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  4. ...a tribute to both the creator and the landmark he left... fascinating and i am loving the simple rhythm you imposed here.(:

    ~kelvin

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  5. A most pleasant rhyming poem. Thank you.

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  6. Great words. I really like the sense of honoring someone's memory and the permanence of the windmill (and the memory).

    Mike

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  7. Standing the test of time ... what living is all about, yes?

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  8. Great poem. Now I feel doing less after reading yours. :( Well done.


    - Joe

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  9. I love this one.
    — K

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  10. Loved it and this one did not find its way in the metal scrapyard!! Great gusto and positivity here in this poem!!

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  11. So true Katherine....love the hope in this one!
    :-)

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